Thursday, March 13, 2014

The bees are coming!



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The virus is spreading quickly
These mites live on bees and travel from bee to bee, thereby spreading the disease. The discovery is the first report of honeybees becoming infected by a virus transmitted by pollen that spread systematically through bees and hives.

I think that the more that the virus is spreading the more that it is killing and reproducing and mutating. As it mutates it get more dangerous and can really grow bigger. If the disease goes on the bees it is making the virus spread faster and making it dangerous for the people in Los Angeles which is bad for them.
The bees are going down (not good)
Commercially cultivated bees pollinate about 90 crops worldwide, a business valued at $14 billion annually. Scientists have attributed that devastation to a deadly cocktail of pathogens, as well as pesticides and beekeeping practices that stress the insect’s immune system.         
I think that if the bees are going down then that is bad and that the more are going down the less bees we are going to get. I think that the deadly cocktail of pathogens are not going to be good for the bees as well it is not good, because that is just going to bring down the bees down more easily and that is not good.
People are making bees go done
Several other possible causes of bee colony collapse have been identified.
Activists have raised concern about a type of pesticide known as neonicotinoids, which have been banned in Europe.
I think that they should not make the bees go down. If people are making things like bees go down then what are going to do? We are not going to make our fruits? We would not have a lot of things if bees weren’t here.






Dear reader,
I have read Deadly virus spread from plant to honeybee, an I am going to tell you what has happen.

The virus is spreading quickly

These mites live on bees and travel from bee to bee, thereby spreading the disease. The discovery is the first report of honeybees becoming infected by a virus transmitted by pollen that spread systematically through bees and hives. I think that the more that the virus is spreading the more that it is killing, reproducing, and mutating. As it mutates it get more dangerous and can really grow bigger. If the disease goes on the bees it is making the virus spread faster and making it dangerous for the people in Los Angles which is bad for them.

The bees are going down (not good)

Commercially cultivated bees pollinate about 90 crops worldwide, a business valued at $14 billion annually. Scientists have attributed that devastation to a deadly cocktail of pathogens, as well as pesticides and beekeeping practices that stress the insect’s immune system. I think that if the bees are going down then that is bad and that the more are going down the less bees we are going to get. I think that the deadly cocktail of pathogens are not going to be good for the bees as well it is not good, because that is just going to bring down the bees down more easily and that is not good.


People are making bees go done



Several other possible causes of bee colony collapse have been identified.
Activists have raised concern about a type of pesticide known as neonicotinoids, which have been banned in Europe. I think that they should not make the bees go down. If people are making things like bees go down then what are going to do? We are not going to make our fruits? We would not have a lot of things if bees weren't here. We would not even be surviving if it were not for the bees that are here and helping us. I think that we need bees cause they are the ones that pollinate the fruit that we can eat. At the same time though they have the virus, but there is still some that don't. Will they ever going to stop the virus from spreading?


1 comment:

  1. Brayan,
    I think that you need a lead and a conclusion paragraph. I think it will be better with a lead because if you just start giving your main idea people won't know what your talking about because they haven't read what you read in the artical. Why do you have lots of spacing? I like the rest of your writing you did a great job on this. You just need to change a few things.

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